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2P! Canada x Male! Reader

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You sighed as your mother helped you into bed, you had been out running with out watching where you where going, you tripped and landed badly on your leg, now there had been a hole in it and you had to stay in bed and have crutches.
"Well then ___, time for you to take those pills the doctor gave you for the bacteria defense, don't want to get that thing infected do we?"
"no..."
"oh its okay sweetie, i will make sure you will not miss much from school, until you get better you will be home schooled"
"why dose that sound bad in my ears?" your mother giggled and ran her fingers through your (color) hair.
"now ___, don't bend the knee at all okay, don't want to destroy the stitches you got all 14 of them"
"yes mom"
"good ill get the pill and some food to take before it so your stomach wont hurt"
"okay mom" she then went out and you sighed, you had a feeling you where going to be bored like hell.

~~~

And you where right, you where right now just watching a movie but oh god where you bored. You had seen this movie before! Now you where just laying in bed basically staring at the celling, then you heard the clock cling at midnight, just as that happened your mom walked in holding a drink and that pill. You never where a huge fan of pills.
"here you go sweetie, drink up and then it would be best if you go to sleep"
"okay then mom" you took your pill and then she helped you get tucked in before she kissed your forehead and left the room.

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When you woke up it was 10 and like called came a huge pain in your leg, it felt as if hell was on it and they where trying to burn your leg.
"FUUUCCKKK!" and there came your mother with more pills, god you hoped that you would not die because of all the pills.
"there you go sweetie, and i know it hurts you just aren't numb anymore"
"you think..." she then handed you the pills along with some breed to eat before so you would not get a stomach ace.
"thank you mom"
"your welcome sweetie" she then kissed you on the forehead
"oh and while i remember, your boyfriend came here to see if you where going to school, i told him that you landed in an accident and that you are not going to school for a while, also he said he was going to come here after school" your cheeks got dusted in light pink over the whole 'boyfriend' thing, sure your mom knew that you where gay but it was still a little new so you where still getting used to it.
"okay then, but school is over at 12:30 right?"
"yes it is, and when he comes here I'm going to ask him if he can take care of you while i go to the store and get your medicine" you smiled a little and your mother walked out of the room as you relaxed as much as you could while you had that little mini hell on your leg. Your mother had turned on 'Jurassic park' for you to watch. But now the only thing to do was wait.

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You must have fallen asleep because when you woke up you could hear your mother talking to someone down stairs. Looking at the clock you saw that school was over but that meant that...
"___! I heard from your mom what happened, what the hell where you doing and-, d-do you have to have crutches? TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED!"
"okay, just calm down Matt"
"...fine" Matt took a deep breath and sat down on the chair that was by your side.
"___, will you please tell me what happened and all the wounds you have so i know?"
"okay then just don't freak out"
"okay then" you took a deep breath before you opened your mouth to talk
"i fell badly and got 2 little wounds on my palm along with another small wound on my knee but then on the other leg i got a deep hole in it where i had to get 14 stitches and wrappings so now i am on crutches since i cant move my leg" you looked at your boyfriend and you had to hold in a little laughter, his face was priceless. His mouth was a little open, the sunglasses had slipped a little to the bridge of his nose and his eyes a little wide.
"you got a hole in your leg?"
"yes"
"thats it i wont let you move at all when you get better AND I'm going to help your mom take care of you and there is nothing you can do about it, eh"
"well i guess i have nothing against it..."
"good" Matt then leaned down and captured your lips with his own.
"i love you ___, you had me worried sick about you"
"i love you too Matt"
So yeah this is something i did because well all the wounds Reader has i have so yeah i just did this.

hope you guys like it~!
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Gothfoxgirl Featured By Owner Edited Mar 27, 2015
TTTTTTTTEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHH FFFFFFFLLLLLLUUUUUUFFFFFFF
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SkrillexGal445 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Student Artist
FLLLLLUUUUUUFFFFFFEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! I'm dying becase it was cute.....Don't cry tomatoes 
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supergirl0987 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 17, 2014  Student General Artist
I really am going to hate doing this critique so harshly...

This was honestly not very well written. I ripped off the bandaid, no sugarcoating, no lying. It was honestly just...bad.

I try my best to not bring any personal opinions or bias on critiques because they are analyzing something, not subjective at all.

Ok. The plot was...meh. It was nice I guess. A bit cliche and mundane but it was okay.

About your grammar! Let's see shall we... Please capitalize, it's such a turn off to see a story and then see that the words aren't capitalized properly.

Also, punctuate. The commas need correct placement. The word "I" needs to be capitalized.

There are so many grammatical errors that I will not be able to fix all of them.

Matt's character. Okay. I guess. He's a bit out of character because of his disposition in this piece. He would be a bit more void of emotion and quite angry if the Reader said that he got a hole in his leg.

Also another thing. Please make it detailed! I'm sure I would've enjoyed this story a lot more if I had experienced more details throughout it.

As an extension on my mini "Detail Rant": How the flying fuck does a person get a hole in their leg from falling? I can understand if he got impaled or something, but what the fuck? You don't just trip really bad and end up with a magical hole in your leg. How? Why? When? This isn't just bad...it's also medically and biologically inaccurate. Please read more about the human body.

Let me elaborate, for the part where Matt finds out Reader has "a hole in his leg".

"You have a hole in your leg?"
"...Yes"
"How the fuck do you get a fucking hole in your leg? Why the hell aren't you more attentive, (Name)! Goddammit. Jesus Christ. Are you trying to give me a fucking heart attack"
"I'm sorry. I promise it won't happen again"
I try shifting my leg a little, the current position I was in getting a bit tiresome.
"Oh hell no! You are not getting your ass out of bed any fucking time. Stay here and make sure your mom takes care of you. I'm gonna be helpin' her so you don't get any funny ideas"
Matt growls. I can tell this tough-guy facade is just his way of telling me he loves me.
"I don't have a choice in this do I?"
"No"
His answer didn't surprise me. I hardly got a say. He's always so possesive. I'll admit it's sexy though.
"Matt...I love you"
His face goes pink, even up to his ears. He may be tough but he still blushes at simple things like this.
"J'et aime"

And done. It's really not good at all because I am in a hurry with getting ready for a dance but you can get the general idea.

Happy Improving! I apologize if I sounded really rude. But when I see improvement that is waiting to happen I jump at the chance!
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
okay first of I'm just going to say that I appreciate your comment but let me first say a few things to defend myself
The first being that no matter how hard I try I'm NOT from an english speaking country.
English is my second language and I wrote this when I had even less knowledge over it and I type fast so I don't forget what it was that I was going to write, so I apologize over the fact that you got annoyed over the fact that my 'i' wasn't capitalized.

Also about the hole in the leg.
Personal experience.
During the time that I was bed ridden from the hole in my leg I wanted to get it out since for the first week of laying there I woke up feeling like hell in my leg. So I wrote this so I'll assure you that this 'medically and biologically inaccurate thing' is completely true.
And I understand that you would find Matt a bit OOC but I find that if you are in a relationship you will soften up to the person, no matter if 2P or not, so I do so in my writing unless I dont feel like it, the fact that this was in a way supposed to be fluff I found it that I would have it like that.
I didn't even think of a plot for it, it was just supposed to be something quick and I found it good enough to post here just to share.

I'm sorry if I come of as snappy in this comment but honestly I've had a crappy day, I've been stressing so bad I've not been able to sleep so again Im sorry if this sounds snappy, I'm trying not to make it look that way.
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supergirl0987 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Hey. It's okay to not be from an English speaking country. English is my FOURTH language. I've learned Tamil, French, and Italian way before that. I've written stories that I look back to now and think, "Why the fuck did I write that? It's so...bad!".

One of the reasons that the I's aren't capitalized is because it reminds me of when I was little and used to make that same mistake. And lemme' tell you straight up, I have had a rough childhood. Born from a poor family and half-raised in the slums was not my best experience ever. So when I see this mistake, I get pissed off. Not at you or the person who did it in general, but the whole childhood experience. I also know how it is to get bullied, even by teachers that teased me by saying shit like, "Look at your grammar *insert my real name*, you need to improve. I know you weren't from the best family but it is not an excuse". It made me feel...inferior. Like I had no control over who I was or what I was doing; that's why I am so regimented when I tell people to fix their grammar.

About the hole in the leg thingy. Did the reader get impaled by something (I know how that feels, I once got a rusty nail stuck in my foot one whole inch and it got infected. Yikes!)? Are you agreeing with me that it is biologically incorrect? Or no? I'm confused on whether you are agreeing or debating.

Ahh. It always bothers me that 2p! Characters are OOC. I guess that's to be expected, you never actually see them. And it's difficult portraying their...unique characteristics.

You honestly needn't apologize! I enjoy it when my constructive criticism results in a defense note.
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Im not agreeing on the biologically incorrect.
And yes the reader was supposed to have the same accident as me.
Which was a rock trying to mate with the leg resulting in the hole.

and its true that we never see the 2P's, so most of us would have no idea how they would act over selected things since all we ever see is anger and bloodlust from them usually.

and also about the grammar, let me just say that I am improving myself, it might be slow but its going there.
I'm going to be honest here, the whole English grammar thing is far from what my native language is, since the rules are so few compared to my native language and very different.
So the slightest improvement is good enough for me, even if it wont seem like much to others.

But I have to say I appreciate your criticism.
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supergirl0987 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Woah...a rock made a hole in your leg? Or was it your foot? I wouldn't have said anything against the whole matter if the details had been added. If your had said that the Reader had gotten injured by a rock; no questions would've been asked. It would've been obvious what had happened.

Yeah. The 2p! Characters are very hard to depict; judging since there is no "actual" material to form a basis of their personalities. I can only imagine, along with the other thousands of Hetalia Fans that the attitudes are getting displayed correctly. Since yours didn't match the majority of the other fan fictions and reader-inserts, you might be able to understand why I said Matt was OOC.

I understand that English has completely different phonetics than other nations. Have you seen Hindi? It's has totally different consonants and the general idea is quite different from English. So technically, since my mother taught me Hindi, English is my fifth langauge. I don't consider it to be however, mainly because I was around 5 and I couldn't really comprehend it that well. I would understand when you say slightest improvement; you should've met my 6th grade teacher... What country/nationality are you from? I'm French-Canadian and Italian, and my mother is Indian. Weird combination of races, I know.

Within this comment, I can only state a few errors in your reply: the commas should be included when conjunctions are involved, apostrophes when you are saying things like "I am" into "I'm" and the general capitalization here and there.

Criticism is the analysis and judgement of a literary work; and bias shouldn't be included. So I apologize if any bias existed throughout my critique. I would say it is kinda like an epitome of flaws that could use improvement; it is a basis for development. Honestly, even today I'm finding grammatical and spelling errors. I always use them as an excuse for improvement.
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It was my leg, right under my knee, had to get 14 stitches because the skin was so ripped.

and I understand, most of the people that write for him have him so much different then I had him in this story.

That is actually an interesting combination of races, I myself am actually Icelandic and I have no idea if I could be a combination of another race.

I usually pay no mind to the 'Im' since I usually type fast, the only times I really pay attention to them is in english class.
I know it a bad reason not to do it but well... I have no excuse. I already know this very well but when its Im or (usually) Your and Youre I usually dont put them and usually put them in they're and pretty much anything else. 
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supergirl0987 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh dear lord. Getting a bit graphic with the description of your wound, aren't ya? Sorry; I just have a very low blood and medical story tolerance level. In other words, I get queasy easily by seeing blood and/or any other bodily fluid. Stupid, I know.

I understand that you tried hard on this piece and I guess I should congratulate you for having courage to even post this story. I just can't though. It isn't your fault or anything; my usually critiquing attitude makes it nearly impossible to compliment somebody unless I am absolutely WOWED.

I have no clue. My family is really messed up, if you consider the mass amount of ethnicities and races that I am. My mother herself is Indian, Polish, and has some slight hint of Hungarian. My father is German, Italian, and French-Canadian. One of my grandfathers is Scottish, or maybe it was Irish... My great grandmother was Greek and Italian. So I have a mixture of many races. It's really fun to go to people and say, "HEY I'M PART GREEK. THAT MEANS I COULD BE A GODDESS. I AM APHRODITE. BOW DOWN".

I also type very fast. I would believe it is because my family has at least 5 computer engineers so I've learned things like Oracle and I'm currently learning about the programmation ( I don't even know if that is a word) of Cloud. I apparently type at an average of 109 wpm. The errors in anything bother me; and I also have a bit of a disorder to not like anything that isn't symmetrical. I'm also a perfectionist. It just bothers me. Have fun with your improvement! Aloha.
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Rosede2004 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014
The male version of my name is Allan (2p!Americas name ) so yeah.
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skyrahwriter16 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
.....wow
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AleksTheKiller Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I may be the only actual boy that's read this from the comments I've seen so far. O-O
great story btw :3
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animeismy Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist
Woo! I'm not alone! I'm a guy too oㅁo
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe xD
Well thank you, glad you like it~
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TheDarkGenius Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Me: Damien (male me) you're stupid I thought you could at least stand up! No, I disagree! 
Damien: :unimpressed: I can
Me: Oh well it sure seems like it
Damien: At least I can keep a poker face!
Me: Crying Death the Kid Emote
Damien: Please don't cry! Matt help me!:help:
Matt: No you deal with itNinja... slip away... with hot dog.
Me: NOOOO MAH FOOOOODD!!!!!!!!!!Sniff
Damien: Oh come on then let's go :| (Blank Stare)
Me: OKAY!Meow :3
Damien:Sweating a little... 
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Mew-Bubble Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
When reading hetalia reader inserts I need to change my male name to Mikey. Because my name is Maddie. The male version of my name is Mattie. Mattie is short for Mathew. Need I continue?
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mindanao-chan Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
me: Andrew(male me), you're dumb!
Andrew:It's no ouchy my dear .*glares*
me: *tries to hold back laughter* whatever floats your boat :P
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Prussia46874 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
*fangirl squeak* *dies*
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...aww man not again...
-revives- 
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stardust1019735 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
That sounds painful....
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
meh, its not that painful, or mine wasn't that painful :/
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skyrahwriter16 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
wait! this happened to you
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah it did like 2-3 years ago I think, don't really remember xD
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skyrahwriter16 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014
O.O
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tingerdog Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow!!! CUTE!!! Most adorable story ever~
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww~
Thank you :D
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tingerdog Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hug 
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Island-Of-Atlantis Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist
This is Adoable~! :iconfangasmingplz: You did a wonderful job with this story :iconrena-ryuuguuplz:
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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Dogshampoo24 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
I don't mind pills it's the liquid that gets me >.<
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I dont often get liquid :/
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Dogshampoo24 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
It's gross
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dantania-dan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can just imagine my mum peeking through the door squealing!
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
how do you know that shes not videotaping the whole thing?
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dantania-dan Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She probably is, my mum loves gays. What?! You should have seen her when she was watching glee.
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LeBroken Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Student Artist
WUAHHH!!~
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
umm,
im going to guess that you liked it?
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LeBroken Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Student Artist
Correct XD
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Fangirl429 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think boyfriends are hilarious, when I broke my collar bone my boyfriend wouldn't let me do anything , yet when he dislocated his kneecap playing hockey and I tried to do the same I quote 'dammit woman stop babying me'. This story is really awesome btw :)
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe, xD
I will have to do something like that with 2P Canada, it fits perfectly,
I hope the both of you are okay thou :)
and thank you :D
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Fangirl429 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm fine now and aside from a deflated ego he's fine too ^_^
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LinkinPark9449 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL reminds me of the time when I was 10 and I got new convers and I was riding my bike and I scraped my elbow rlly bad it left a bad scar...but it's cute ^.^
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Wildfire1019 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel like I can relate to that somewhat. When I was 4 I was running down a dirt road (Which are everywhere since I live in the country side) with my dad walking behind me when I tripped and fell on my face while my knee skidded on a jagged rock. I had a wound that covered my entire knee and I had to have my dad carry me back to the house because I couldn't walk. Left a nice scar too.
Yeah, I was accident prone as a child. :| Take for example when I was about 2 and 1/2 when I tripped and fell on cactus… this occurred about 5 other times in the following 2 months because I couldn't learn from my mistakes.
I certainly wasn't the brightest child.
:stupidme: remake 
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LinkinPark9449 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ouch!! That sounds like it really hurts!! I'm glad to hear your okay now though! Yeah I wasn't a bright kid either haha
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gymleader97 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
Been there done that.
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :aww:
I hope your elbow is still working fine :D
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LinkinPark9449 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it is ty :D and np
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French-Tomato Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
........thats so scary I fell off my bike before but never triped when I ran and got a hole in my knee and who doesnt hate pills :O
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I for one hate to take in pills when they are in plastic tubes that will open when they get in my stomach. The idea of it just dosen't please me
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French-Tomato Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
I hate all pills I have this weird feeling im going to choke on it and die.it all started with a life saver and I never trusted pills again I dont even like little pills
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