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Akatsuki x reader :: Deidara ending ::


(( Sorry for the sudden weirdness Im pretty sure I have had a little to much sugar… ))

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" I like Deidara…" Konan smiled at you since well how could she not your face was dusted lightly with pink.
"you know i think he likes you too, i did hear him mumble in his sleep about you and a true art work" you looked up at her with hope sparkling in your eyes.
"you think so?"
"no i know so" you hugged her and she hugged you back.
"So ___, how about you go over there and tell him how you feel?"
"I-i guess…"
"oh come on, You like him, He likes you, get on with it all ready"
"Konan you have no idea if he likes me or not!"
"then why did I hear him mumble in his sleep about you being a true work of art?"
"…"
"exactly, now get on with it"
"…fine…"


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"HEY DEIDEI!!" you yelled as you glommed him
"AAARRGHHHH!!"
"….sorry dude…."
"its okay, un, just wasn't expecting that…un…"
"yeah um okay, sorry…"
"its okay ___…."
"…."
"umm ___?"
"yeah Deidei?"
"why do you call me Deidei?"
"…'cus I can"
"…mhm…"
"OH GOD JUST KISS ALREADY!!" You and Deidara looked at the exactly same time to see Konan and Hidan hiding and that Konan was walking over to both of you…Wait,what? Next thing you knew Konan had slammed you and Deidara so both of you where kissing. Lets just say that your and Deidaras face went cherry on this subject.
"KONAN WHAT THE HELL?!"
"NOTHING WAS HAPPENING AND YOU BOTH LIKE EACH OTHER SO WHY DONT YOU BOTH JUST GO AND DATE?!" Deidara just stood there and his face went more red, if that would be humanly possible but he writer wants to so it happened the area around him was also getting a reddish tone to it, how that is possible, don't ask me.
"umm ____, un"
"what is it Deidei?"
"I am going to listen to Konan, not just because she scares me-"
"I do what?"
"-but because I really like you and I'm going to ask you if you would like to-"
"HEY I ASKED YOU A QUESTION!"
"-start going out with me?"
"sure, I would love to"
"WHY IS NOBODY LISTENING TO ME?!" And with that both of you walked away from Konan who was still in a little rage over nobody was listening to her.  
Sorry about taking so long, In the end I went fuck it and made it crack-ish 'cus I have had a little to much suger right now.

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]

Now then to try to think about the rest of the endings...

Hope you liked the crack-ish fic
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:iconcuteakatsuki:
CuteAkatsuki Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
how did konan know he was talkin in his sleep??? does she watch him when he sleeps? O.O
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
walking past his room and hears him most likely 
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:iconbunnygoblin:
Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
which ones deidara?
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondeidaraplz: <=== Thats him, you can also use google to see better pictures of him
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:icon1000meredith:
1000meredith Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
poor Konan lol :XD:
too funny :D
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:iconmilliedeidarafan:
millieDeidaraFan Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student
I love it all!!!Best story ever!!!! :D
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconthedragonblackheart:
TheDragonBlackheart Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm gonna do what she says, not just because she scares me-
I do what?!
(*continues talking*)
^story of my life!
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
to much truth
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:iconkileythedestroyer:
Kileythedestroyer Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Deidara just stood there and his face went more red, if that would be humanly possible but he writer wants to so it happened

I can't stop laughing!!!! X'DDD
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well....DONT DIE ON ME!!
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:iconkileythedestroyer:
Kileythedestroyer Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Far from it, deary <3
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:iconmagicthekiller:
Magicthekiller Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Holy I can't stop laughing!! 😆😆😆
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wellp im glad you like it :D
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:iconmagicthekiller:
Magicthekiller Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconawesomefaceplz: I allways do!
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:iconakinata-uchiha:
Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I really liked it! I hope you continue to write these AWESOME fan fics whenever you can ^^
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I will but it will take a lot of time since im still trying to figure everything out...
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:iconakinata-uchiha:
Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
If you don't mind me asking, what do you mean "figure everything out"? Do you mean like get new ideas? Just asking o3o
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah I have one idea for hidan but im still trying to figure it all out xD
and then I need to give the others ideas.
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:iconakinata-uchiha:
Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well I can't wait until you finish your idea(s)lol bet they will be great you're one of my favorite deviants!
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Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*le gasp*
really? :iconhappytearsplz:
It makes me so happy to hear (read?) this, thank you :icondragonhugplz:
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:iconakinata-uchiha:
Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Of course! You have awesome ideas! When I say something I never go back on my word, because that's my ninja way!
:iconthumbsupplz: :iconjumphugplz:
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
*hugs*
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:iconflipnoteriversong:
FlipnoteRiversong Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Are you still working on the others? I want to read them all! I'm evil that way. I love these!
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah just trying to figure out what to type down...
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:iconflipnoteriversong:
FlipnoteRiversong Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Try getting a piece of paper and brainstorming ideas.
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah could do that :/
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:iconflipnoteriversong:
FlipnoteRiversong Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Glad I could help.
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:iconinnocenzo:
Innocenzo Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Oh god my sides XD
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well im just going to guess that you laughed to hard xD
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:iconinnocenzo:
Innocenzo Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
XD yes
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:icontwistedlittlesoul:
twistedlittlesoul Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No more sugar for you.
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Much more sugar for me :D
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:icontwistedlittlesoul:
twistedlittlesoul Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NO! No more suga!!!
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
whhyyy?? :iconsadfaceplz:
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:icontwistedlittlesoul:
twistedlittlesoul Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
BECAUSE YOU END UP KILLING THE BEST ARTIST IN THE WORLD!!!!!!
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I DUNN CARE I SHALL HAVE ALL THE SUGAR I WANN!!
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:icontwistedlittlesoul:
twistedlittlesoul Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! NEVAAAAAAAAA!
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:iconshadet06vocaloid:
Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Wait, what about Hidan? Wasnt he hiding with Konan un?
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well he just did not want to get the wrath of Konans anger.
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:iconshadet06vocaloid:
Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
oh makes sence
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:iconbrigettestayshardy:
BrigetteStaysHardy Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sooo awkward XD
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah...
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:iconkipomi:
Kipomi Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Konan is SO OUT OF CHARACTER and it kinda anoys me, but overall, it's a nice story...
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:iconkillerer2708:
Killerer2708 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
she is supposed to be out of character.
im sorry if it annoys you but I dont really know how to akatsuki acts since I havent gotten far in the show but my friends tells me about the characters.
and thank you :aww:
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:iconkipomi:
Kipomi Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
You...y-you haven't got into the show, but you write a fic...no seriously, don't do that EVER again.
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:iconakinata-uchiha:
Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Frankly I really like the story! And that was really mean of you! I feel she should be able to depict the Akatsuki's behaviors in any way she likes! I can totally relate because I'm writing a fan fic now about the Akatsuki and they may seem out of character but I really like it that way! If you have such a HUGE FUCKING PROBLEM with her stories then I suggest you read someone else's. Please don't be writing such rude comment on other's stories!
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Kipomi Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
Excuse me, but I think you're the one being rude. I disliked , now don't go hate me because I have a freaking opinion about it. And who said I have a "HUGE FUCKING PROBLEM" with her stories? Honestly, this was the only story I read from this writer. So don't go and bash me without even knowing me. Respect others opinions, not all of them have to be the same as yours.
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:iconakinata-uchiha:
Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm not saying everyone's opinions have to be "the same as mine" but if you disliked some things in her story you don't have to say them. It's her story and she can keep it any way she wants. And,to clear things up, I admit I didn't mean to write "stories" what I'm referring to is just this story.
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:iconkipomi:
Kipomi Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
I didn't want her to change her story in the first place. And are you saying that I can't speak my mind? Seriously?  I have all the right to say what I think about this fanfic, positive or negative.
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